I like the essential chickenly shapes that seem to me to work even in the absence of contouring.
The very pale printing is due to dried out stamp pads. I like the pebbly texture they gave on this rough-surfaced paper, but the paleness is too light. Tomorrow I'll get a really good black plus a dark brown stamp pad and re-print these. I tapped on the reds and yellows with the corners of other stamp pads. 5562b has watercolor yellow and red. Too dark for the body. Still proofing.